On the fringes of a forest rustic n' green
A lone figure stands unfeeling unseen
the loss, the memories, the pain in his eyes
as his haunting melody reaches beyond the skies
Years of travel, searching far and wide
Swimming through oceans got nowhere to hide
A choice once made, many a moon ago
drawing him away from all that he called his own....
into the unending abyss he was thrown
his past fading,the future unknown
all he ever wanted was to be loved
to have and to hold, his soul,his beloved
Then she came waltzing by
His fevered breath leaving him on a sigh
on a whim he had left his solitude divine
walking unbeknownst through fate's infinite design
the eyes peeking through long lashes pure aquamarine
cleansing his pain darkened soul to a diamond's shine
A shattered fortress, peeking onto a wondrous day
his loneliness and solitude shedding away
his call returned,the melodies blend and sway
as two souls become one, a symphony gay.......
Liz
Writ - 5th March 2012
Time - 11:45 A.M.
This ain't just okay luv. This is brilliant! This poem seems to give a new dimension every time i read it...so powerful and expressive :) oh, you're really great competition! :D
ReplyDeleteHehehe am I now....? U sure?....But thanks nyway :) m glad u lykd it :P
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ReplyDeleteM glad u lykd it :)mmm but Nancy KAN is my mum :)
ReplyDeleteSomething lurched inside me, as if I was watching the whole journey, A living experience, melting inside me and flowing out... brilliant :)
ReplyDeleteThank You mom :) Ur the B.E.S.T!! muwahh :D :*
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